Ian-The-Archer's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["Waterman" Ep. V]

Hmm

It's gotten better and more intense. It can be considered now as a serious series. Nice job, I think you're running out of jokes though. Though, you haven't really used the flash back joke at all, which is a nice change since you've used it every 2 minutes in your other episodes.

["Waterman" Ep. IV]

Heh

Great job, your series has improved since episode 1 a lot.

The humor is great, although I kind of saw that last one coming. Great job overall.

["Waterman" Ep. II Part II]

Err

Truthfully, the series is getting duller at this point. However, the sound has improved, and the story depth has increased.

Those two alone has made the series easier to play out because now that you have the characters personalities out of the way, you can make it funnier.

["Waterman"]

Bravo!

Great work! I think you were under the influence of family guy when you made this series.

The lip syncing could use a little more work, so could the normal graphics. Compared to the cereal and cartoon graphics, indeed it could.

[MJ Secrets]

Heh

Very nice audio editing! It was a good job either using a voice actor to fill in some of the words you couldn't get, or if you did this all with some pitch and bass simulator. Whatever it is, you did a great job of doing it because I thought this was funny.

[Reading Rainbow (Spanish)]

Err

Well, I could understand most of it better then reading rainbow 1 because that had no captions. Funny in a way because the transelator sounds so scary.

[Super Mario Mishaps 2]

Hmm

Daigo! You for got the homer-like scream for the "mario goes crazy" scene! That's like the main humor for that section!

Overall, could have used a bit more creative deaths. 'Cause I saw that pipe joke a mile away(the first one, the second one was funnier).

[NeoJam]

<3

I <3'ed it. It was cute. And the reason why the last frame is broked is because you have a stop frame colliding/non-existing goto{(scene main)(frame, 1)(ect)}

Maybe something else. Anyway...

This could use improvement on graphics (IE: More frame by frame when turning around and such).

The sound was accurate as to what the monsters would be saying, however, it could be more expanded apon (more creature sounds).

The biggest downfall is that there wasn't much story or long length... that's something that's needed much!

The only other quarrel is the "broken" frame, you could learn a bit more actionscripting before making another movie.

Overall, pretty good effort.

<3

[A Simple Line 5]

Lovely

Great frame-by-frame guys. You guys knew what you were doing, and did it good. Especially with the timing. AntiClockClock's was secksie, no doubt, and kinda had a "laser pen" effect style. When I saw ToxicBomb's, holy shit. Kinda looked like Ed Edd and Eddy animation with that little dude bouncing his head to the music. Orodreth had a great start off, it went almost as well with the music as ToxicBomb's. Good song choice, by the way. ZT's was funny as hell because it was the most random one. Element's had a Pete and Pete feel with the music, loved it.
By the way, for future reference, you should list the songs and tell what songs by which authors. (I'd really like to know what ToxicBomb's song was).

Overall, a great way to put all your creative Frame-By-Frame talents together.