Sorrry
Well, you manage to totally rip the whole game off and just screw with the plot a bit. Your ripping skills suck though, you can't take away the white lines around the characters? You couldn't rip *all* the voices with the mic? Do you even know any girls who can help you do the voice?
Other then that, it's more like a replica of what would be the first rough draft of what they were going to do. I don't think I would go even as far as a rough draft.
Sorry, make up your own work to score better in the ratings. Other then completely sucking, you could make the own graphics! You can even do the voices in a sound recorder and raise the pitch. But I doubt you'll do that ever.